Kia Ora Ketura I like your Diamante poem it is very interesting with the Piranha and Shark. My Diamante was a Piranha and a Eagle. But mine was hard because I couldn't think of anything that was a verb for Eagle. Was it hard for you?.
Kia orana Ketura I really like your diamante poem. I wrote a diamante poem as well. The black piranha is really interesting. Was it hard to write a Diamante poem?.
Hi Ketura, I love some of the words you have selected. Your word choices help paint a picture for me as a reader. I think of a piranha and a shark as having some common characteristics. I wonder what you would have written if you selected two contrasting animals. Say a piranha and a mouse (one strong and vicious and the other meek and mild). Keep writing.
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ReplyDeleteI like your Diamante poem it is very interesting with the Piranha and Shark.
My Diamante was a Piranha and a Eagle. But mine was hard because I couldn't think of anything that was a verb for Eagle. Was it hard for you?.
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ReplyDeleteI really like your diamante poem. I wrote a diamante poem as well. The black piranha is really interesting. Was it hard to write a Diamante poem?.
Hi Ketura, I love some of the words you have selected. Your word choices help paint a picture for me as a reader. I think of a piranha and a shark as having some common characteristics. I wonder what you would have written if you selected two contrasting animals. Say a piranha and a mouse (one strong and vicious and the other meek and mild). Keep writing.
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