Eden - Birthday Boy : Settiing

It was a dazzling morning where the sun was glowing bright in the sky in 1951 in Korea. The village was deserted and the ground was dusty just like an old cupboard that hasn't been cleaned in years, the houses were filled with bits and pieces of airplane parts and mammoth tank parts.

Koliata- Descriptive writing on Black Piranha

A mysterious creature in the Jungle water. Eating almost half of the village. One man desperate to catch this mysterious creature swimming around the jungle water.

The Black Piranha is fearsome creature when it is in the jungle water.It’s not a real monster compared to others fish. It snap its teeth quickly. But the most amazing thing about it is that it has burning red eyes. And it has big stocky body almost like a bulldog. Its manuvable . The black Piranha hunt alone. It has an average size.The teeth is one of the sharpest in the world.

Howard - The Bird and the Mouse

The little grey mouse Mickey was walking through the grass.Then Cube the green bird saw Mickey and flew down and caught him. Mickey struggled and tried to get away but he couldn`t.

The bird puts his wing over the mouse to keep him so he could eat him or perhaps he could be keeping him safe from a cat or a dog.Mickey the mouse looks scared because he thinks he might get eaten by the bird. He is squeaking because he wants to go home to his family but he can not get away because he is trapped by the bird.

The mouse thinks that the bird feels hungry and mice taste delicious to some birds. But maybe the bird is just keeping him safe incase he'll get eaten by a cat or a dog.

I wonder if the bird let the mouse go or ate it.