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Wednesday, 20 May 2015

Serena - Mrs Beaver and the Birds

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Mrs Fat Brown Beaver had just settled down to eat her small round nut. Mrs Fat Brown Beaver was clutching her nut between her front paws when suddenly she was surrounded by sharp beaked birds.

These birds were trying to grab her round nut but she held on to her nut more tightly. Inside herself she was very cross at the birds for trying to grab her nut. The lazy birds all four of them pecked at Mrs Beaver’s nut. There were small black and white birds who were plump with sharp pecky beaks.

Mrs Beaver kept eating her nut until it was all eaten and there was nothing for the birds to eat. So with much screech and hopping and looking they realised that there was no food for them. So they flew away.

Mrs Beaver cleaned her whiskers and settled down for a nap with no birds insight.    

1 comment:

  1. Nice Glen Innes
    I like the way use put facts about Mrs Beaver and the birds.
    Keep It Up,I like that use put adjectives and metaphors.

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