Swimming sports 2017
Today some students and me worked hard in the swimming competition. Not every student swam, but most of us did. When I entered the swimming I heard everybody cheering as loudly. It was like s a siren piercing my ears. In all my races I came first, but I think my opponents could do better if they practiced. Swimming was quite difficult . I struggled with butterfly. Overall I am really happy with my places in swimming.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Huntah,
ReplyDeleteI was also at the swimming sports watching the swimmers, it was very hot but it was worth it to go and watch the hard practising students that swam. I really enjoyed reading your simile and it was quite loud, anyway great little paragraph on swimming sport keep it up
Hi Huntah,
ReplyDeleteI see that your paragraph is giving information. I enjoyed your story , and I liked that way how to put a picture collage. Did you do butterfly competitive?
kia ora Huntah
ReplyDeleteI loved the way you described the crowd cheering.I was also at the swimming competition but I did not swim because I did not bring my togs and I hated swimming.Did you know that the olympic swimming team
did not get a gold medal. Are you going to continue swimming?