Wylie lived in ancient Egypt. Wylie was waiting for the sand storm to die down so he could go hunting for food. He thought about what to eat, a fish from the Nile river, a juicy lizard, a slithering snake, a plump or even a furry fennec fox. When Wylie flew up in the sky, Wylie saw a lizard but when he scored down to catch it, it ran away between big rocks. Wylie sat on the top of a pyramid and he was starving. He got hungrier and hungrier.
Wylie was soaring through the skies looking for food but he saw sand from the sand storm. Wylie sat on a pyramid and looked at the people. Wylie saw a fish from the from the Nile river and he flew down and caught it. And he ate it and he wasn't hungry any more.
You used a good quality of describing the lizard, snake, fish and plump. To be honest I didn't know what a plump was until I searched it up, thats what the netbooks for right. I'm like wylie I love fish, once i finish it i'm stuffed. What part of Wyie is your favourite?
ReplyDeleteHi Matthew.
ReplyDeleteI like your story about Egypt. You use good descriptive words in your story and I love reading it.