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Tuesday 31 May 2016

Lauren - Comic explanation

This is my explanation comic that I did in class today.


6 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Lauren
    Your comic about explanation writing looks good. In explanation writing I don't know how to write in passive word either. But I know how to begin by defining or describing the topic. Do you like writing explanations?

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  2. Lauren your work on explanation writing is very challenging and your last part of your comic you write about something called passive voice can you tell me how that works? .

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  3. Lauren your work on explanation writing is very challenging and your last part of your comic you write about something called passive voice can you tell me how that works? .

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  5. Hi Lauren. Your comic strip about what you did in class is impressive, I don't know how to use a passive voice for writing either. Though I noticed some errors, on the second part you forgot to point the speech bubble towards your mouth and on the third you forgot a space between the writing and but. Other than that good job and keep up the great work.

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  6. I forgot to ask, what did you use to make your comic strip?

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